Friday 1 May 2020

writing

what makes your family amazing?


My family is awesome because we go to lots of places and have fun with each other. We also love each other and that's why we are the best family. You're probably thinking that every family is like that but what makes our family the best family is that we care about each other and look after everyone.

Thats why our family is the best.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Mack,
    What a fantastic piece of writing. The sentiment in this oozes pride. Have you shown Mum and Dad this? I am sure they would love to read it :)
    Mrs Gibson

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  2. Hi Mack, I am so glad that you have a wonderful caring family and that you enjoy spending time together. I liked reading this, good job.

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